I don't really agree with Ethalyn
The melody is awesome! Very good, original, good sounding and I could remember it when the song ended, but you need to separate some parts of the song. The intro was good but you keep putting things on and off too much. It doesn't get boring if you keep things the same for 8 or 16 measures. (If you make some difference after that)
Also mixing is bad, but you're going to fix that? And I like your main synth. It's very cool, so is the piano.
The ending is cool but the 30 seconds before that (where everything leaves seperated) I don't like at all.
So, conclusion: arrange this song better, the potential is there but it needs quite some decent changes.
Mjattie