sorry, for late response, but I was in Austria ;)
I don't really like the first synth you used. But your bass and other synths are awesome. Really professional sound, but the first synth which is the main synth just really sounds off. Drums are very good. The drum roll is also a bit strange, lol... And the house organ is cool! :)
I agree with Shenkhar: I think a side chained pad on the background that plays the chords will add a lot to this song, it doesn't really has to be present, but I think it'll help.
9/10, 5/5: it's very good but the main synth makes (in my opinion) it sound strange. Melody is quite catchy though.
Mjattie