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sorry I forgot to review so here is a review

You've used a MIDI piano, not really nice sound... But you arranged it well! I like the original song and this one is also nice. I give you -2 because it sounds mechanical and second because the piano sounds ugly...

Other than that, good job, 4/5, 8/10

Mjattie

Dude09 responds:

thanks

lovely rhodes?

I love the electric piano you've added in there. Tell me what software do you use? May I guess "reason" ? I'm not sure though... Really nice drums you've got there and I loved it in boxmen. It added a really nice atmosphere. You played this yourself? Then you're pretty good XD And if you're using reason 4, maybe a collab would work out with us :) (check my music if you want ;))

Overall: you get the full pocket of me; 5/5, 10/10, download, favourite.

Gr Mjattie

BinaryGuy responds:

collabs?
collabs?
Dude i have to look into this hardcore now.
Like hardcore look into this!
Thanks for the review!

lovely drums

great drums but the bass is barely hearable and the pad/synth that drops in at 1:28 is a bit too loud.

Great work though, 5/5, 9/10

Mjattie

sonicxtreme responds:

thanks man

at the beginning I thought: DOWNLOAD

but the song didn't really progress to anything and I didn't really like some parts.

The good:
Nice bells and synths, violins and clarinet(?).

Advice:
I'd put some (more) reverb on the pluck at 1:03. The piano is strange and I don't really like it, it also misses expression (adjust veolicity) and most of the notes sound a bit off. the phasing instrument what comes between the pluck is not really my taste also. I think it's the melody it's playing. Also the lenght is a bit useless because it sounds like you've copied the first 2,5 minutes and then paste them after that. And the ending is a bit lazy, a fade out.

overall: this'd really work in a flash game. Not the best piece I've heard, but it has potentional.

5/5, 8/10

Mjattie

Taketheleap responds:

Very in depth, Thanks a lot. Yeah there were a couple of sounds I was unsure of, but i think in this track that's kinda what I liked, almost like it sounded warped to me.

nice synths

I like your synths and the piano is great! Drums are ok, a bit standard. Try with some more reverb on the piano and drums and maybe adjust note veolicity, because the piano sounds a bit mechanical.

has potential, 5/5, 8/10

Mjattie

I love the ocean sound

The story this song tells goes to the bottom of the see and back to land. (or something. Really the melodies are just awesome! I only think that the start is a bit too slow.

Nice, but would maybe be better if you'd played it yourself (I know you can't because you don't have a (midi)keyboard) but that would make it a bit less "spastic at points.

Maybe a tip: at 3:18, the piano does not play a real melody. Maybe you could give the quarter notes an accent, to make it easier to listen to (but that's my opinion)

Overall, a wonderful job, you're growing song by song, I'm amazed but you could try a bit with my advice if you want.

5/5, 10/10

Mjattie

ObsidianSnow responds:

Thanks for the review, bud.

Hi, I'm Mjattie, passionate about music, technology, games and every combination of these things you can think of

Mathijs Wiermans @mjattie

Age 31, Male

Software Developer

Netherlands,

Joined on 4/28/08

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