at the beginning I thought: DOWNLOAD
but the song didn't really progress to anything and I didn't really like some parts.
The good:
Nice bells and synths, violins and clarinet(?).
Advice:
I'd put some (more) reverb on the pluck at 1:03. The piano is strange and I don't really like it, it also misses expression (adjust veolicity) and most of the notes sound a bit off. the phasing instrument what comes between the pluck is not really my taste also. I think it's the melody it's playing. Also the lenght is a bit useless because it sounds like you've copied the first 2,5 minutes and then paste them after that. And the ending is a bit lazy, a fade out.
overall: this'd really work in a flash game. Not the best piece I've heard, but it has potentional.
5/5, 8/10
Mjattie