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The composional structure is really nice. The melodies you've made and the way you've orchestrated it are nice.
The strings are a bit too loud though and the beginning sounds very static and unrealistic, it's a shame. Try working with some knobs, for example velocity. You can make a more dynamic piece that way. This unrealism gets less though, around the middle.
5/5, 9/10
MW-Audio (Mjattie)
yea!
W00t this actually sounds a bit like game music. But yea, omg, what an epicness! The transitions are so wonderful done, so it doesn't really matter that you've put so many different things in this song.
Simply marvelous! 5/5, 10/10, download, favourite!!
MW-Audio (Mjattie)
!!!
wow, I totally agree with IDR
Yes the intro immediately catched my attention! I love the pads in this song, the effects and the drums are nice. You know I'm working on a glitch ambient song as well and will upload it maybe tonight xd
the bass is indeed nice mastered and this track is one of the best I've heard here.
I haven't got much else to tell so:
5/5, 10/10, download
MW-Audio (Mjattie)
Thank you kindly sir! :)
look at ze starz
today we had an english listening comprehension and it was a documentary about constellations and well, the geometric places of a pyramid group in Egypt look the same as the constellation "orion" haha
About the song:
Mastering: quite nice, but the kick and bass don't blend that well. Have you tried sidechaining the bass with the kick? I think it will give a more pumpy feel. (or did you do it allready? I'm not sure...)
Melodies are nice, as always, no complains.
I don't like the key change, because it always reminds me of the very bad carnaval music from here xd
(the patch of the bass = crome pole? Effect at 2:00 is jonah right? haha :P)
I like it, though! Piano piece is nice, though, maybe add some accents to it. I really like the drum piece but then the transition to the dancey/techno piece doesn't really fit...
9/10/, 5/5
MW-Audio
I'm not sure what you mean by "sidechaining the bass with the kick". PM me, I'm interested...
Actually the bass patch was Purring Bass. And yes, the effect was Jonah. :P
Thanks for the review, MWA!
happy xd
good job on the synths. Bass and drums aren't really original, but if that's not your aim, then that's no problem :P I feel it's lacking vox or something.
Overal not bad, I like it,
9/10, 4/5,
MW-audio (Mjattie)
wow
this is really nice, because of a couple of reasons,
1: It really tels a story
2: playing is really good
3: recording is really good
4: reminds me of martha mier
great job! I got nothing to complain about
5/5, 10/10, download, favourite
I'm not familiar with Martha Mier, but I will definitely look her up. Thanks for reviewing! :)
omg so nice
You're really talented, you know that :O
Maybe not great for halloween, because halloween is mostly just scary and building to a climax and this song is just full on scary. But on the other hand, I really can see the zombies chasing you, so I think you did a great job :P
Love the laughing fx and the drums are quite original, well... actually almost everything is original here :P
great job!
5/5, 10/10, download, favourite
MW-Audio (Mjattie)
thanks for the review dude! I figured half way through the song I'd add some church bells to it... then it kind of became a halloween theme from there on. I'm glad you liked it.
Apparently I got honorable mention for the competition, but im too lazy to claim my $20 LOL. I'll tell them to donate it to unicef or something
yea
The brass is a bit ugly, drums are nice, main synth is quite nice, 00:36 is nice.
Add a counter melody to finish it xd with other cords or something
It's nice, love the bass.
5/5, 9/10
MW-Audio (Mjattie)
yeah...lol thanks man...peace
Hi, I'm Mjattie, passionate about music, technology, games and every combination of these things you can think of
Age 31, Male
Software Developer
Netherlands,
Joined on 4/28/08
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